Room 11 has been writing about how to make hot chocolate. Here is my writing hope you enjoy.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am Year 5 and my teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wednesday, June 16, 2021
Monday, June 14, 2021
The Alien space ship
Room 11 have been making discriptions of an alien space ship or treehouse here is:
Wow! I started walking down the footpath Suddenly! I can see some cows being sucked into a spacecraft.
I also see blue lights shining down from it.
The spacecraft lands, and the ramp appears and goes down.
I am nervous and scared but I walk inside.
I can smell the gas from the spacecraft and food being cooked in the oven.
I can hear buttons being pushed - they are beeping and I can hear the engines being revved. And I did see some cows so I tried to get them to follow me but it didn’t work.
I can see aliens coming up the ramp so I hid in one of the cupboards and stayed quiet until they left. I fell asleep on board when the engines started and that's when I jumped out.
And the ramp started closing. So I started to run as fast as I could but it was too late. So I said bye to my mum on the phone and it started to get higher and higher.