My underwater running olympics

 Everyone lines up then the person shoots a flare gun. They all start sprinting as fast as they can but they have to watch out for the fish. Number 42 is representing NZ, his wife is probably watching him at home  and I think his wife is probably really proud of what he is doing. Anyways, he jumps over the first lot of hurdles then the people start catching up. Oh no!!! NZ has fallen down to fourth place he has spotted the finish line this is bad for NZ. He is coming fourth now he is in third place India is in the lead. How is NZ going to come first place? NZ is in the lead of second the finish is near no India has won NZ 42 is having a chat with 32 India complimenting and saying what a good win you got THE END!!!

Travel Narrative Writing

In room 11 we have been writing a plan and story for a Narrative story we have been doing this over this first week & I think that we might be doing a different one next week, hope you enjoy this story thanks.

 Bang! one Saturday night I came up with an idea in my head. I told my friends to wake up  at 3am so we could go and explore a haunted house. I told them it was full of ghosts and they wouldn't  believe me. I set an alarm for three o’ clock zzzzzzzzzzz the alarm went off I woke all my friends up.

 I told them it was time to go, they all ignored me and went back to bed. I started yelling in the house for them to get up. It worked, so I told them to get ready and I’ll be waiting outside until we arrived

at the haunted house.

Then my mum drove us there. When we got out of the car we stepped a tiny bit closer, we fell down a gutter into a sewer. There was a ghost behind us. The ghost threw something in the sewer & we all screamed like girls. We found a ladder so we escaped & rang up the GHOSTBUSTERS!.