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Friday, August 6, 2021

Travel Narrative Writing

In room 11 we have been writing a plan and story for a Narrative story we have been doing this over this first week & I think that we might be doing a different one next week, hope you enjoy this story thanks.

 Bang! one Saturday night I came up with an idea in my head. I told my friends to wake up  at 3am so we could go and explore a haunted house. I told them it was full of ghosts and they wouldn't  believe me. I set an alarm for three o’ clock zzzzzzzzzzz the alarm went off I woke all my friends up.


 I told them it was time to go, they all ignored me and went back to bed. I started yelling in the house for them to get up. It worked, so I told them to get ready and I’ll be waiting outside until we arrived

at the haunted house.


Then my mum drove us there. When we got out of the car we stepped a tiny bit closer, we fell down a gutter into a sewer. There was a ghost behind us. The ghost threw something in the sewer & we all screamed like girls. We found a ladder so we escaped & rang up the GHOSTBUSTERS!.


2 comments:

  1. Don't panic Travel,here I come.I've got the car packed with my slime.I've got my outfit ready.I'm set to DESTROY the ghosts.

    Do you want to come?.

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  2. hi travel. i like you blog post. Did Mrs Cassidy come?.
    from Zander.

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