Room 11 has been writing about how to make hot chocolate. Here is my writing hope you enjoy.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am Year 5 and my teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wednesday, June 16, 2021
5 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Well done Travel.
ReplyDeleteIf I followed your instructional writing I would end up with a lovely drink.
I prefer hot chocolate to Milo.
When I do get a hot chocolate I don't have marshmallows as it makes my drink too sweet.
Do you make a milo at home?.
I hope you are having a wonderful holiday.
I hope you are having a wonderful holiday with your family and friends Travel.
ReplyDeleteHello Travel.
ReplyDeleteOnly a few more days and we will be back at school.
I hope you are having a wonderful time with your family and friends.
Good afternoon Travel.
ReplyDeleteI am looking forward to seeing what learning you have been doing in class this term.
Kia Orana Travel.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.