Everyone lines up then the person shoots a flare gun. They all start sprinting as fast as they can but they have to watch out for the fish. Number 42 is representing NZ, his wife is probably watching him at home and I think his wife is probably really proud of what he is doing. Anyways, he jumps over the first lot of hurdles then the people start catching up. Oh no!!! NZ has fallen down to fourth place he has spotted the finish line this is bad for NZ. He is coming fourth now he is in third place India is in the lead. How is NZ going to come first place? NZ is in the lead of second the finish is near no India has won NZ 42 is having a chat with 32 India complimenting and saying what a good win you got THE END!!!
Well done Travel. You have a quality piece of writing with good ideas and great punctuation. A dew commas may help with your compound sentences. Ka pai.
ReplyDeletenice work Travel you done a good job and a good quality piece of wrtting im very impressed and i liked how you wrtiited your olympics Hope you have a great day bye
ReplyDeleteI know this runner came first Travel,before you even told me.You see,I was the fish swimming beside him.
ReplyDeleteI decided to support him and the other participants.
What difficulties would you have if you were running in flippers?.
Good afternoon Travel.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a quick look at your blog to see if there was anything new.
Take care and keep warm.
Good morning Travel.
ReplyDeleteJust wishing you a safe,happy and warm day.
Take care.
Hello Travel.I am just leaving a message to wish you a safe and happy week.Take care and keep warm.
ReplyDeleteHave a great week Travel.Take care.
ReplyDeleteI am looking forward to checking out what you have been doing over this unexpected break from school Travel.
ReplyDeleteHave a great weekend.
I hope you had a great first day back at school Travel.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Travel.
ReplyDeleteHave a great week.
I am looking forward to your next post Travel-I wonder what it will be about...
ReplyDeleteHave a great weekend.
Hello Travel.
ReplyDeleteI look forward to reading your next post.
Maybe you could set yourself a challenge and see if you can post one before the end of term :)
You have great ball skills Travel.I enjoyed watching you and your team play soccer today.
ReplyDeleteWell done.
I hope you are having a wonderful holiday Travel.
ReplyDeleteHave a great week Travel.Take care and keep warm.
ReplyDeleteHave a great term 4 Travel-all the best :)
ReplyDeleteI look forward to your next post Travel :)
ReplyDeleteI am looking forward to reading your next post Travel.
ReplyDeleteHave a great week Travel.I look forward to your next post.
ReplyDeleteHave a great week Travel.
ReplyDeleteAll the best with the last week of school Travel :)
ReplyDeleteHave a wonderful holiday Travel.
ReplyDeleteGood afternoon Travel.
ReplyDeleteI was just checking to see if there was any new post.
Have a wonderful holiday and I will check your blog soon.
Hi Travel.
ReplyDeleteI am just checking to see if there was any new post.
Have a great week :)
Good afternoon Travel.
ReplyDeleteI am just having a quick look to see if you had completed any of the SLJ activities.
I will check again soon.
I hope the holidays are going well :)
Good afternoon Travel.
ReplyDeleteI am just checking to see if there was any new post.
Have a great holiday :)
Hi Travel.
ReplyDeleteI was just checking to see if you had any new posts.
Take care :)
I hope you have had a great holiday Travel.
ReplyDeleteI have been busy helping the neighbour bake and make sandwiches.
What have you been doing?.